2011

The essay choose to write is 2011. It is about reasons why you are graduating in 2011. I choose it because it had some good transition words. I also though that the sentence structure was good. My essay had a good hook and I think that this was a good subject to write about.


I want you to grade me on voice and conventions.







The question that is being asked is what motivates you to graduate in 2011. Think about it, why let 13 years of your life go to waste, I know I won’t. I will be graduating in 2011 because I have people who supports me along the way, I want to get somewhere in life, and achieve my goals.

First of all, I will be graduating in 2011 because I have people who support me along the way. My family supports everything I do. They support me by encouraging me to do the best I can and to be a success. My teachers also support me by encouraging me to do my best. They help me with my work when I don’t get something. When they teach us something new they put up examples and my sure everybody understands it. Some teacher even stay after school or on their lunch break to help the student out. If those people care for you enough to help you when you need it why let them down.

Secondly, I will be graduating in 2011 so I can make it some where in life. Not graduating in 2011 for me mean that I can’t go to college on time or not go at all. Even if I graduate the next year I will not be able to go to a good college. If I don’t make it to collage I can’t get a good job to support myself. Without a good job I won’t be able to get very far in life.

Lastly, I will be graduating in 2011, so I can accomplish my goals. In order for me to accomplish me goal to become a doctor I have to graduate. If I don’t graduate I can’t get a job as a doctor because I won’t have the education I need to have in order to become a doctor. Another goal I would like to accomplish is to be a success and have a successful life. In order to have be a success and have a successful life I have to finish school because you won’t make it very far in life without a education. Do you think you can get far in life without a education?

To sum it up I will be graduating in 2011 because I don’t want to let the people who support down, I want to get some where in life, and achieve my goals. Now that you read my essay , you tell me are you planning on graduating.